WALT-use paragraphs
my character is a platypus.His skin is aqua and has an orange beak.He has a brown spy hat and he has brown bulging eyes.
he is a spy and and lives in Danvile,Tri state area.His enemy is Dr Doofismurch.My character also knows karate.His owners are called Phineas and Ferb.
My character has alot off secret passages in his house and some are in the in t.v, sofa, closet and the wall.When ever he walks into Dr Doofismurchs office he always gets trapped.
My character is quiet and only says one thing.
My character is perry the platypus and his spy name is agent P.
Self assessment:what i did well- i used paragraphs more than twice
what did i learn-i learnt how to use paragraphs
what could i do better next time-maybe work a bit more on it instead of rushing it.
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