perry the platypus

WALT-use paragraphs
my character is a platypus.His skin is aqua and has an orange beak.He has a brown spy hat and he has brown bulging eyes.

he is a spy and and lives in Danvile,Tri state area.His enemy is Dr Doofismurch.My character also knows karate.His owners are called Phineas and Ferb.

My character has alot off secret passages in his house and some are in the in t.v, sofa, closet and the wall.When ever he walks into Dr Doofismurchs office he always gets trapped.

My character is quiet and only says one thing.
My character is perry the platypus and his spy name is agent P.

Self assessment:what i did well- i used paragraphs more than twice
what did i learn-i learnt how to use paragraphs
what could i do better next time-maybe work a bit more on it instead of rushing it.

rugby

on Saturday i played rugby against fielding.we won 20-5 and i scored a try.the player of the day was Talyah.the week before we played fryberg and we won 25-15, unfortunately i did not score in that game.We are 3rd on the table.

my sisters presant

On tuesday mum,dad and I went into rebal sport looking for a birhtday presant for my sister.We walked all the way to the fishing gear when we saw a pink fishing rod.I rememberd that she said "i want a fishing rod for me to use by myself"one day.So I said "what about that" as i pointed to the fishing rod."Yeah ok" said mum so we got it plus we also got some 3 and 4kg weights for dad.so i hope she likes the presant.

school today

Today Mr Mcnaught bought in some new 16 net books for us to use.We also did the amazing race I got five and a half laps but i didn't beat my record of six laps.